The music level was okay, but as soon as he went outside, the birds' were VERY loud, compared to the music. Other then that, good job!
The music level was okay, but as soon as he went outside, the birds' were VERY loud, compared to the music. Other then that, good job!
Thanks :> And yeah I deliberatly made the birds louder than the music. I see how that may seem as something unintentional though.
Story: 2/3 No in depth story, but the ideas are great!
Animation: 3/3 Fitting for a happy feel...
Music: 3/3 Very fitting... maximum happiness!
Extra: 0/1 I rarely give an extra point, don't worry! Great flash!
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8/10 = 4 stars
Thanks for the review!
One More thing...
Wouldn't putting a toothpick under your toenail and kicking a wall be more efficient f then using an icepick? just saying...
Any ways, great flash.
Ow. And thanks.
1/10 [please read]
graphics: 0/3 [...]
sound: 1/3 [that's some nice COPYRIGHTED music you got there...]
story: 0/3 [Amoebas FTW... I think...]
extra: 0/1 [don't worry, I rarely give this one]
[Try to make an actual cartoon with a story and not just some random loop. I bet it's hard, but putting some time into your flashes can really improve their quality. Take blockhead for example: You may not be that good of an artist, but if you can put time into making a few minutes of origional material, you have a good shot at the newgrounds community!
DISCLAIMER: I've never used flash]
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Hello there... you are reading this, congrats!
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Joined on 9/15/09