vingw's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Meets Kirby]

Story: 2/3 The story... it was great.
Animation 3/3 Great animation... it kept the feel of the flash nice and consistent.
Audio: 3/3 It worked well. A little abrupt on the end, but the music was fitting.
Extra: 0/1 I rarely give this one out... don't worry!
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8/10 = 4 stars
P.S. Another protection point for me... yay.

[Maximum Happiness]

Story: 2/3 No in depth story, but the ideas are great!
Animation: 3/3 Fitting for a happy feel...
Music: 3/3 Very fitting... maximum happiness!
Extra: 0/1 I rarely give an extra point, don't worry! Great flash!
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8/10 = 4 stars

Brewster responds:

Thanks for the review!

[StrawberryClock-Hurricane]

Story: 2/3 I love it! The story is great, funny and planned out well! A little basic, but oh well!
Animation: 3/3 Extra animation points because this isONE of your first submissions, but the animation is great. This is why people need to practice before posting.
Music: 3/3 It is better off without the music. The sounds and voices were great!
Extra: 1/1 Every clockday submission gets an extra point... what is clockday?
9/10 = 4.5 stars

[B-Gone]

Story: 2/3 I don't know... what is clock day? Seems like you did it correctly...
Animation: 3/3 The ending screen was a little blank. But other then that, there were a lot of clocks. Even an orange clock! Wait... clock... orange... where am I going with this?
Music: 3/3 Very fitting for... this...
Extra: 1/1 HAPPY CLOCK DAY! Wait... it's not clock day... and I don't know what clock day is...

[Pain on the Brain 3]

Time to do one of my classic reviews...
Story: 1/3 Really? A little basic... but that doesn't make it bad...
Animation: 3/3 Great... perfectly fitting to the mood of the animation.
Music: 2/3 ...what music? Well, the two tracks you used were used well.
Extra: 1/1 I didn't give much credit to the story, but the ideas were great. Extra point for you
7/10 = 3.5 stars

["One More Minute"]

One More thing...

Wouldn't putting a toothpick under your toenail and kicking a wall be more efficient f then using an icepick? just saying...
Any ways, great flash.

JonBro responds:

Ow. And thanks.

[<unfinished.swfs>]

Reveiw fer each video

Madness: This is great. I understand where you stopped before you reached the revenge thing. Must've been pretty hard to get to that point in the first place.

Galaxy Gags: Smash them together and BAM... you got yourself a flash. Anyway, who said a flash has to be long? It was great on itself.

SMB3: Add an epic falling scene, then the spike and you could've finished it with an anti-climatic end

OTMK 4.5: uhm... unfinished is right.

Cave story: Okay. I have no idea what it means, but okay.

[Just Hanging Around!]

2/10

graphics: 1/3 [I can tell what you drew there... it's a start]
sound: 1/3 [Fitting, copyrighted music you got there]
story: 0/3 [story? I thing NOT!]
extra: 0/1 [Don't worry, I rarely give this one]
[You need more story... well actually, you need a story in the first place. Please read my other two reveiws for more advice]

[DaveyToons 10232011]

1/10 [please read]

graphics: 0/3 [...]
sound: 1/3 [that's some nice COPYRIGHTED music you got there...]
story: 0/3 [Amoebas FTW... I think...]
extra: 0/1 [don't worry, I rarely give this one]
[Try to make an actual cartoon with a story and not just some random loop. I bet it's hard, but putting some time into your flashes can really improve their quality. Take blockhead for example: You may not be that good of an artist, but if you can put time into making a few minutes of origional material, you have a good shot at the newgrounds community!
DISCLAIMER: I've never used flash]

David responds:

FUCK you

[DaveyToons:12122011]

2/10

graphics: 1/3 [at least I know what it's supposed to be]
sound: 1/3 [Uhm... good song, but it is so... uh...]
story: 0/3 [wut]
extra 0/1 [don't worry, I rarely give this one]
[Keep working on your flashes, practice makes perfect]